Persuasive Writing 2013

Dear Customer,

I think you should read my favourite book called Creepella Von Cacklefur, Ghost Pirate Treasure!

Why SHOULD YOU read my book?

I recommend this book because it is an excellent  mystery book that is very interesting and exciting.  When you read this book it takes you to imaginary places.  While you are reading it, you begin to feel as if you are actually one of the characters in the book.

The main character in this book is named Creepella Von Cacklefur, who is a mouse that  loves to help her friends solve mysteries .  She loves to travel to many places.  Also she is a bat mouse who can fly like a bat and can turn into a bat.  She also has a pet bat who is coloured purple.  She absolutely loves purple and wears a beautiful long purple  dress that touches the ground.  She has long black hair and wears a gold necklace around her neck.  

If you read this book you will become a better writer because it contains lots of powerful words that you can use yourself.  It also contains great words that hook the reader in.  

Even though I am too old for this book, I still love to  read it because it is a really entertaining book that is fun to read.  It is also a great book for little children to get them hooked on reading. Even the cover of the book is awesome because you are attracted by the bright colours and clever  drawings.

Now you know about my favourite book, it’s time to read it for yourself.

Netball 2013

This is my presentation about room 7 playing netball.  We learned lots in our netball season.  We had an awesome term learning new skills on how to play netball.

6 Hats to reflect on my learning for term 2, 2013

This is my presentation about what we have learnt for term 2 2013.                      

Enjoy my presentation.  Please leave a comment.

Paper

 This is my group presentation about paper.  We had to do paper because paper is something you can recycle.  We have an idea for our school because at school some people are litter and not using the bins for their rubbish.    Enjoy our  presentation about paper.

Charday And Chasity Persuasive Writing about Rubbish at our School

We are Responsible for the rubbish at our School

Dear : Principal of Tamaki Primary.

This needs to be dealt with. We think that WE ARE responsible for the rubbish we’ve produced.

Firstly, the rubbish at our School  attraction to rats and mice which means diseases  will spread around our  school. This also won’t just affect us but also the community around our school , which will also mean parents won’t get to work to make money to support their families and people will end up staying home sick.

Secondly if the wind blows the rubbish into the drains. This will mean the drains will get blocked and we will have to get our school to pay a huge amount of money to try and unblock them. Do you want this to happen?

Our main reason is that our beloved caretaker Koro has to stay at school to try and pick up rubbish that we have left behind and that will mean he won’t be able to go home and spend time with his family. These are our reasons for why we think we should get rid of our rubbish.

Rubbish in our School, Experiments

This is my presentation about rubbish in our school.  We are trying to plan away not to have any more rubbish in our school.

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6 hats Current events 2013

This is my  presentation about the 6 hats currents about the New South Wales vs Queensland. It was a good game.  The New South Wales won.

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